Nan's birthday party.

On September 2018 we had my Nan's birthday party at this mysterious marae I was so furious what the  marae looked like. When I arrived my unity's all gave me a hug it was so tight inside and saw the  tables all seted up and lots of my cousins I was so shy suddenly I hit the  wall. It was so sore there was lot of people coins on the ground I carefully picked up the coin and realized It was plastic I found this interesting machine I had a look and saw a label I red it and it said enter your gold coin and you will receive a treat I tried it and it worked I said yay to the machine I was getting all the coins off the ground an and giving them to myself. When the caked appeared it looked like bank cake it was so realistic everybody had a kai then they had the delicious cake.

  WALHT write a interesting recount. I am trying to use better different beginnings.                         I found it hard to come up with my own words and trying to add some speeches